Redesign Your School Athletic Pavilion | 2014 National High School Architecture Competition #134: Recent activity

Hello, I am an American architect living in Madrid, Spain and am one of the jury members for the first round of this year's competition.
You did a good job collecting information, identifying specific existing problems, and communicating how you would solve with your design proposal. You displayed consistency of concept throughout your design process. I appreciated the variety of technical skills you experimented with and displayed during the different phases.
I hope you keep developing your technical skills, so that you can include more details and communicate a higher level of sophitication with your design proposal. Do not be afraid to explore more alternatives during the brainstorming phase, and evolve the concepts further during design development.
Nice job and thanks for sharing your work! I hope you had fun on this project and continue to use your problem solving skills, possibly in an architecture related career.

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