Pocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition: Recent activity

So far, I don't see much of a green space for the kids that you are targeting. Maybe more green space could be better option than the playground? Your choice.

The words in the drawing is extremely difficult to see, maybe scan it into the computer to have a better visual of what you trying to display.

Very detailed analysis of the demographics of the neighborhood. This is very helpful in determining which group of client should be the main focus.