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LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
It's great to see you embracing the design process, exploring a variety of solutions and creating unique ones tailored to this challenge. I really appreciated seeing beautiful drawings done by hand, Photoshop, and rendering software. You expressed a lot of great ideas in a variety of formats.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
This looks great. I'd like to see a plan for the final design in more detail.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
This is a very creative, distinctive idea. I like how you took inspiration from the flower, and developed it into something useful, the shade structure, and even considered how the water would run off of it.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
While it's nice to see different views of the shade structure, and I understand it's the centerpiece of the design, I would still have liked to see the overall plan, so that we'd have a sense for where everything is located in the final design.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Wow, this is a beautiful rendering! It makes such a difference that you added in the buildings across the street. Thanks for bringing the context to life. I like the rhythm of the planter boxes and benches, and the different heights of plants.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Very creative precedent example.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
It's great to see your skills in hand drawing in 2D and 3D. I especially like the shade structure and bench sketches.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
The structure is nice but doesn't look too safe,try placing more beams toward the center of the structure, in case of any harsh weather,otherwise it could be dangerous
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
I love the layout. It just needs more work such as shading in more areas.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Ehhh...Your Photoshop Skills Need More Work!!