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LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
I really appreciate your very clear examples of inspiration! You justified every element in your park with the research that inspired it! In your final design, I would take the time and effort to place it in the environment. Your park reads very different as something in the ocean (or maybe sky) than it would in a neighborhood. Great job on your park. Keep up the good work!
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
GREAT inspiration photo--love the local focus.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Great floral images--would have like to have seen more instances of parks in your area or parks in similar regions.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Thank you for setting clear goals for your park. I also enjoyed all the inspiration images--especially all of the local examples. It helped me create clear expectations for the park. The arches on the final image were a nice touch. I also was very excited to see so many sketches for this project.
I would have loved to see you write about whether or not your pocket park met any of these goals in your final step. Do you really think it's a place for teens or do you see only adults valuing the look of the park and feeling welcome?
Really great work!
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LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
The overall design is great. It could be more open.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
The archways are creative and fit with the location of the park, the art district. I think it makes the walkways more interesting.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
How will the garden be maintained? Also, how will you be able to ensure that the 'fruits and veggies' are not tampered or destroyed in any ways by people walking throughout the area?
Thanks :)
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
The design is nice, a shade structure over a pathway with benches along the way will be a nice spot to relax.
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