D Crispy's Account

Great overall design concept in how to utilize the space in many ways. Additional brainstorming ideas would have been nice to see to show other options and ideas that could have been put in the space, even if they would not have been developed, just to show additional thought processes. Great Revit work and renderings to show the overall, completed design. Well done!!

You have some great ideas for the site given. I liked how you started to define spaces and created different types of spaces. The circular seating will definitely promote socializing. It would be great to see a canopy of trees surround the seating area to give a little privacy and protection from possible wind or sun.

I like the shade structure it is very unique and different from an everyday shading. The park seems to plain though, you need to add more components in your park, maybe a few benches would help

I really like the overall layout of your park, as your walkways converge at a central location. One thing that has been told to me by multiple comments on my own project would be applicable to yours as well, and that would be an additional walkway so that people could enter from all sides. Another attribute that both your park and mine have in common is that we have a lot of grass on the site, so a substitute that would require less water would be a smart decision, and a bit more variation of vegetation would really make your park look extremely appealing. Overall, for the site that you are using, this park fits the community quite well and I like your simplistic design. Great job!

That one guy on the left looks very depressed. Maybe his wife left him? Maybe he got laid off from a job? Who knows? A truly spectacular representation of the modern businessman as he solemnly walks a lonely path towards a small park in hopes that it may renew his value in life and help his self-esteem... but alas, he finds no hope from such a venture and wanders off to possibly end his life... Who truly knows about this man... Anyways a great park design and very simplistic 10/10.

I second Base Offset's notion. I really like the minimalist design and openness of the site. I'd visit often!

This shade structure looks really nice and I like how you incorporated the whole Japanese thing into this park to really make it your own, in a way it makes it completely different from everyone else. But, I think you should add more components to your park overall because your park looks pretty empty and adding some people or tables could help with that.

If would be really interesting if you try to incorporate a amphitheater in this area because it seems perfect for this propose. Like just put a sound wall behind it and it give this area do much potential with different bands and artists coming to perform their songs.

The design of the park seems nice and simple. Gives the surrounding area of basic needs and provides a feeling of peace and serenity. The free flow style looks great!

Your park is very nice :) It's nice to see that you included kind of a shader for the benches so people don't have to worry so much about the sun. I would recommend though, maybe adding a little more components? Maybe some trees? It'd make the park look more diverse and also it adds more of a feel because (although nothing wrong with it) it seems too "open", but maybe that is what you want to incorporate. Just a mild suggestion, but overall it's very nice :)