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LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

jbanwart commented on Project: The 7 Wonders of the World

Great effort in getting this project together! I would encourage you to build out your design more and really think about the essence of the 7 wonders of the ancient world, and how they work with (or against) each other. It's a huge undertaking to try to unfold in a pocket park! I commend your bravery.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

jbanwart commented on Final: The 7 Wonders of the World

It's great that you are thinking about shade and the needs of people in the park. To get a more classical influence on your design, I would keep it to one dome and add some more ornament. Or I would keep it contemporary and change the columns. This central structure is so important to your park, you don't want to confuse your styles!

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

jbanwart commented on Brainstorm: The 7 Wonders of the World

This seems like much more of a developed solution than brainstorming. I would like to see some more sketches and inspiration photos that helped you get to your final design!

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

Base Offest commented on Final: The 7 Wonders of the World

The design and layout are great, but it would be pretty amazing to see out of the spheres like some kind of skylight. It would a local attraction and just pretty fricken cool!

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