Cocos's school: Recent activity

Well done, Team Coco... I can see you are startng to think about how you can improve the environment, but remember to remain objective until you have collected your research- if you keep an open mind as you seek inspiration from other buildings or anything else you will be surprised at what you can discover. Your success statement is a good start, but I want to modify it so it represents a more general vision of what you want to have achieved with the design at the end of the project. For example, try expanding on the first part of your sentence- how will the school make the students (and teachers!) feel, what is the result of having a 'good' environment? Why do we need a 'good´environment?

Think about using some more precise language- your English level is very high, and I would like to see you becoming more adventurous with your vocabulary and structures.