Alondra M's Account

Nice Pictures, but they're too far away. At this stage, you should be focusing on the interior and its features.

I look forward to seeing your progress in the 'Brainstorm' step. You should try out more than a few design ideas and then check which works the best. That will be the one you should develop further in the 'Develop Solution' step for the final design.
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It will be helpful to include site-specific information here such as lot dimensions, neighborhood characteristics, amenities like groceries, public transportation, schools, libraries, healthcare etc. Also include information on what is immediately adjacent to the project site. Your site seems to be surrounded by commercial/industrial uses. What does it mean to your design? Where will you locate our house on the site and other functions within the house such ad bedrooms or study rooms so that they will have the privacy and the quiet? How will you create a 'buffer' between your house and the commercial neighbors/ parking lots etc?
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Both your inspiration pictures are great. Can you go a bit deeper and analyze which other specific elements in each of these examples you like and why? How do they relate to your client profile and site context?
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You have a good client profile. Now ask what the answers you have developed for the client profile means in terms of design solutions.
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Good pictures of the bus shelters. You could use more pictures of sights surrounding the school.