Honorable Mention - Top 10 Finalist - Ahzin Nam - Redesign Your School Athletic Pavilion | 2014 National High School Architecture Competition #186: Recent activity

Nice rendering ! The rendering conveys your concept sketch very well including the building materials. A minor suggestion: I would use "exterior" instead of external in the title.

It is a great diagram, just a minor suggestion, it would be helpful if you note what the red and green colors represent.

A good analysis of design decisions in regard of the environmental conditions.

Nice job in defining what the potential issues are for all the spaces. Also, the key map is very helpful. A small improvement would be to scale down the red labels (A, B, etc), aside from that, well done!

It is good that you stated the orientation of the building, as it will have an impact on the sustainable design decisions later on.