Green Space: Pocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition: Recent activity

I like the fact that you included grass in the outer walls of the park. It hints what the park inside has to hold and that is full of grass and places to relax. I also suggest putting vines on the walls as they represent freedom of growth.

I really like the overall design, it looks modern, and I especially like the grass wall that you have placed in your park it makes it look more relaxing and inviting.

outstanding attention to detail

You should try explaining why you have decided to go with more of a green space instead of a concentrate type park. Double check your spelling. I also believe that you should try to incorporate more actual humans in your project.

Although this is a very good idea, I feel there was a better way to tie it with the school and the community.

You did a very good job at keeping up with your ideas from your "brainstorm" tag! The sketches look almost identical to your final model. Consistency is key to architecture!

The Park looks cool and create an aerial so that you can show the layout and how it incorporates the surrounding area as well.

The park design is well-thought out. It would be beneficial to possibly show an aerial view of the park. That way, any viewer would be able to make correlations between the different aspects of the park. The park does incorporate a good proportion of landscape as well as hardscape.

I would have liked to see a view from the top of the final rendered design that I could relate the other renderings to. a tree less view would be nice to see exactly where everything is better. I do like the fact that you used so many trees because that's something Vegas doesn't have a lot of.