2013 national competition project | Library Redesign #125
|The redesign challenge was to redesign your school library. My schools library was built along with the school in 1967, and the school was later renovated twice. it was renovated in 1997 and 2009, however none of these renovations involved the schools library. this means that our schools library is still in the same size and style that it was built in in 1967, and while that may have worked then it no longer works now.
One of the problems with the library is that it is small. the amount of students that want to use the library for studying or study groups has outgrown the size of the library. this results in students not using the library as a study spot. the library size also restricts the size of tables so when the size of study groups exceeds four people like it usually does there is not enough room.
The styling of the library is also out of date. it no longer feels modern and cool, but instead feels old and stuffy. this is then off putting to many students, and the result is that even less students go into it.
my redesign will add modern flair as well as more space to the library. these renovations will result in the library becoming a popular place to be once again.
Comments
I think you did a good job of trying to summarize the project however I just cannot get past the lack of proper capitalization of sentences. Yes; even in this day and age good old fashioned punctuation and grammar are important and by choosing not to use them you run the risk of projecting yourself as uneducated to those reading your summary.