Hello, I am an American architect living in Madrid, Spain and am one of the jury members for the first round of this year's competition.
This rendering view is one of your best, in part because of the angle and lighting. You have clearly demonstrated good 3d rendering skills and a certain level of sophistication with your design proposal. The original concept of creating a zen garden atmosphere was clear and creative. I also see a strong connection between the projects that inspired you and your proposal. I also enjoyed your hand sketches in the brainstorm phase.
During collecting information, more photographs of existing conditions and interviews with users would be useful. Also, inclusion of floor plans, sections, labels, or detailed descriptions in the final phases is important to clearly communicate the layout of the spaces shown.
Great effort and thanks for sharing your work! I hope you had fun working on this project and keep using your creative and technical skills, possibly pursuing a career in architecture.
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Really nice rendering! The form of your facility is very pronounced but has subtle beauty.
Hello, I am an American architect living in Madrid, Spain and am one of the jury members for the first round of this year's competition.
This rendering view is one of your best, in part because of the angle and lighting. You have clearly demonstrated good 3d rendering skills and a certain level of sophistication with your design proposal. The original concept of creating a zen garden atmosphere was clear and creative. I also see a strong connection between the projects that inspired you and your proposal. I also enjoyed your hand sketches in the brainstorm phase.
During collecting information, more photographs of existing conditions and interviews with users would be useful. Also, inclusion of floor plans, sections, labels, or detailed descriptions in the final phases is important to clearly communicate the layout of the spaces shown.
Great effort and thanks for sharing your work! I hope you had fun working on this project and keep using your creative and technical skills, possibly pursuing a career in architecture.