Obeysergiom's Account

You showed a good variety of renderings that offer overall perspective and also pedestrian views. However, overall context and scaled people could have been added to your renderings to show that the scale &proportions of the spaces is appropriate for the functions of the program. Also, a little more initial research about existing conditions / problems could have helped influenced your ideas - and identified to us what the main problem areas are for your school.

I think you made great use of the software programs to show your design. You also picked some great projects to inspire your design. Overall I would like to see more explanation as to "why" you made certain design choices. For example:why is one space by another? Why does the school need this type of facility? Etc... Also, presentation is important. Each step should have an explanation of your thought process that tells a story about your building and the vision you have for it. Drawings and renderings should be presented in a way that is clear and easy to understand.

-A final set 2d drawings (plans and building elevations) are needed
-Good perspectives
-Nice final building shape
-interior organization could be better if circulation was considered

-A final set 2d drawings (plans and building elevations) are needed
-Good perspectives
-Nice final building shape
-interior organization could be better if circulation was considered

-A final set 2d drawings (plans and building elevations) are needed
-Good perspectives
-Nice final building shape
-interior organization could be better if circulation was considered

Nice design, but not enough information regarding the ammenities of the shelter.