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I would like to see an elevation or section view with some people in them so that you can have a sense of proportion and scale. You also want to convince viewers that your design does what you say it does. Aerial cut-aways like you have here are interesting but I feel it shows too much that it get's confusing. Revit has a cool feature where you can use a "3-D Camera" and make interior perspectives. Try to focus your perspectives on the very best parts of your design like the main entrance or courtyards. You also mentioned in your collect info that you wanted to create more spaces designated for student work and is fixed. Maybe you could have thought up some really cool furniture that was fixed with your overall concept/design.

Where will the books be? unless this is a strictly digital library.

I love how you have organized the space! It really seems to compliment the original building. Also your circulation spaces flow very well.

Great! I'm glad you took the time to model your school as well! It is nice to see how your addition will connect with existing. I think the courtyards are a great feature and it also allows plenty of natural sunlight into the spaces.

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Nice use of space. How did you do this?