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LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Overall the design is good but a little random, like tree placement and the thickness of your walkways.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Maybe add more detail for the overview. Explain the reason why you create a pudding park, and what aspect makes your park special from everyone else?
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Very creative design of walkways for visitors. Curved walkways gives a different feeling for visitors as they are walking it.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Seems like a good layout and your walkways are cool but they are all diffrently sized and thats kind of random and weird. Overal really nice design and looks like you have stuff for all kinds of people.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Your description is a little vague. What do you want your park to do for the community? Why did you choose the name pudding park?
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
I feel that your description is lacking in proper detail. Why is it called pudding park?
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Overall the design is nice but it seems to plan, like you don't have much on your park and a bunch of open space guarded by a tree or two, like there isn't a big field for kids to play a game of football or catch without having to go around a tree. I like the pathways and how it goes through the whole park and how you get to see everything. it is just the placements on the trees, they look scattered around
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Overall the design is nice but it seems to plan, like you don't have much on your park and a bunch of open space guarded by a tree or two, like there isn't a big field for kids to play a game of football or catch without having to go around a tree. I like the pathways and how it goes through the whole park and how you get to see everything. it is just the placements on the trees, they look scattered around
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Overall the design is nice but it seems to plan, like you don't have much on your park and a bunch of open space guarded by a tree or two, like there isn't a big field for kids to play a game of football or catch without having to go around a tree. I like the pathways and how it goes through the whole park and how you get to see everything. it is just the placements on the trees, they look scattered around