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LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

FrankieLives commented on Develop: Freemont Pocket Park

Thank you! I had scanned my bubble map and tried to make the markings darker but unfortunately it lost some of what I wrote

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

FrankieLives commented on Final: Freemont Pocket Park

Oh, I hadn't noticed that, thank you very much for pointing that out!!

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

JG commented on Project: Freemont Pocket Park

Great design! I love that you have created a variety of different spaces within the lot, which makes it feel very inviting. You also have a good attention to detail, providing opportunities for multiple audiences and showing an awareness of climate needs. Don't forget about some of the basics though - what is the scale? How big is the lot?

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

JG commented on Final: Freemont Pocket Park

Great renderings! Keep a close eye on the details and scale though - You're tables are floating in mid-air!

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

JG commented on Develop: Freemont Pocket Park

Great sketch! Seems like you hit a point where you needed to go back to the brainstorming step a little bit! Remember - the design process is circular and you often have to go forwards and backwards a few times until you find your final design.

Really enjoy seeing how you're processing your ideas and working to fit them in the site smartly.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

JG commented on Develop: Freemont Pocket Park

I agree! Bubble diagrams are helpful for other to understand the relationships between your ideas. Nicely done - just wish the picture was a bit easier to see.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

JG commented on Brainstorm: Freemont Pocket Park

Great inspiration image. I like that you are thinking about different materials and structures and how they interact with your research on plants.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

jbanwart commented on Project: Freemont Pocket Park

Really awesome project! You should be proud of your sketches and renderings. They are really vivid and give a unique perspective to your design.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

jbanwart commented on Develop: Freemont Pocket Park

Your watercolors give a really beautiful and unique view of your visions for this park. It's a very interesting way to actualize your space!

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

jbanwart commented on Develop: Freemont Pocket Park

This is a really great way to think about the breadth of your project, and how to use your space!

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