Nacho's Account
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
pmjoanes commented on Final: pocket park
I think I'm looking at a pathway? This probably should be more of an oval. Grade 17
at 09:01 pm, 04 November 2015
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
pmjoanes commented on Final: pocket park
You need a closer shot of the garden. Nothing much here. Grade 13
at 09:39 pm, 03 November 2015
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
pmjoanes commented on Develop: pocket park
More labeling needed. Also, homes and garages need color coding. No north symbol. Grade 16
at 04:24 pm, 02 November 2015
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
pmjoanes commented on Project: pocket park
Good description of the park, and the people that you wish to serve. Grade 18
at 01:53 pm, 28 September 2015
MDesign a Bus Shelter
pmjoanes commented on Develop: Bus Shelter
No evidence of any work done today. Final structural design grade, 15
at 08:09 pm, 28 January 2015
MDesign a Bus Shelter
pmjoanes commented on Brainstorm: Bus Shelter
Good sketches. But, you should have labeled your sketches. Grade 18
at 10:36 am, 21 January 2015
MDesign a Bus Shelter
pmjoanes commented on Project: Bus Shelter
Nice explanation for the Bus Shelters necessity. But, you need to check your grammar. Grade 17
at 07:02 pm, 11 January 2015
MDesign a Bus Shelter
pmjoanes commented on Collect: Bus Shelter
You should have more locations around the school identified for Bus Shelters. Also, your page should have a cover photo by now. Grade 18
at 07:00 pm, 11 January 2015