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LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
pmjoanes commented on Final: Ay;en's Pocket Park
Nice progress. Grade 19
at 08:49 pm, 04 November 2015
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
pmjoanes commented on Final: Ay;en's Pocket Park
This probably should be under the Developing Solutions tab, but at least it's a start. Good to see you're focusing. Grade 18
at 09:27 pm, 03 November 2015
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
pmjoanes commented on Develop: Ay;en's Pocket Park
No labeling. No North symbol. Are there trees on this site? The actual site for the perspective park is empty, no mass. Paths are missing also. Grade 13
at 04:22 pm, 02 November 2015
MDesign a Bus Shelter
pmjoanes commented on Develop: Stop by Mi Casa
This should be the Final Structural design. Without amenities. Grade 19
at 07:43 pm, 28 January 2015
MDesign a Bus Shelter
pmjoanes commented on Brainstorm: Stop by Mi Casa
Interesting design. Looking forward the Final design. Grade 18
at 10:23 am, 21 January 2015
MDesign a Bus Shelter
pmjoanes commented on Project: Stop by Mi Casa
Good explanation of the problem, but you need to check your grammar, capitalization. Grade 18
at 08:21 pm, 11 January 2015
MDesign a Bus Shelter
pmjoanes commented on Collect: Stop by Mi Casa
You need to provide a photo for your title page.
at 08:12 pm, 11 January 2015
MDesign a Bus Shelter
pmjoanes commented on Collect: Stop by Mi Casa
Excellent explanation of your Collecting Information portion. But, keep in mind this shelter is covering more then one corner. Grade 19
at 08:12 pm, 11 January 2015