Cjaleea's Account

Sketches should have been hung before taking the pictures. This is a poor angle. Grade 14

You need to be more decisive about the location and people that you plan to design this park for. Grade 16

Good description, but you need to go into further depth about the location and the need for the park in this location. Grade 16

No evidence of any work done today. Final structural design grade, 12

Nice sketches. But you should labe your drawings for clarification. Grade 17

You should have identified Bus Shelters.

You need to check your spelling before posting. You need other sites identified for your Bus Shelter. Grade 15.

You need to check your spelling and grammar. Why is the Bus Shelter necessary for Curie? And, keep in mind, the Bus Shelter wil be on several locations around the school. Grade 12