Cjaleea's Account

Nothing new here. Grade 0

Good start, but the park looks too wide. Grade 17

Incomplete. Not enough information. No north symbol, or color coding. Grade 13

You have some great ideas and sketches!

Thanks for sharing your design. Your park reminds me of some of the private neighborhood parks that you might find in a London neighborhood. These city parks are small hidden green spaces that are open to immediate neighbors. It is a great idea to offer your community an open green space that has plenty of room to play, sit, gather, and enjoy. The fountain is a good way to buffer street noises and add a calming element to your design. I would encourage you to take another pass at your design and consider your original intention to design for children. What could you add to your design to make it more attractive to children of different ages?

This park looks very great and just classic. Looking through your pictures gives me a nostalgic feeling, because I feel like I've visited this park when I was younger. I really like this park.

There seems to be a lack of thought put into your design.Also, the benches, tables, and chairs seem to be placed at random locations. There doesn't appear to be much shading on your design either.

I really like the idea of a corridor park, with the fountain tying the space together. The design is reminiscent of a park of the 19th and 20th century.

The benches and places to sit are seemingly randomly placed. The park might be a little better if some sort of pattern and more spread is applied to the benches.

I think this is a really great idea! Not only are the trees super pretty, but with the benches underneath them, the trees will provide shade for park goers.