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There is no evidence of anything being done today. Grade 0

This should be under Developing Solutions. There's nothing here for a Final Design. Grade 10

No Labeling, Homes, Trees, or North symbol. Grade 12

In the overview you should be explaining the need for this park, and why you chose this location. Are there a lot of families with children in the area? Are there a lot of teenagers in the area? Grade 16

I like your sketches and you have some really nice ideas. But I think they need a meaning or concept to where you got the designs.

Your final design needs more landscape and people. either sitting or standing. Grade 17

Of course this came from your head. But, the question is, What is it? Grade 17

You have no site for the bench. Also, whom are you designing this bench for? Your client? Grade 14

Check your spelling. You need to describe your client, and the location for this bench. Why these people, in this location? Grade 16

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