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LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
The park has two different shade structures and benches which are covered with shade when the suns out, the park is rather small, but it fits the project, overall it is a nice park, it just needs more of an "umph" factor to make it stand out.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Perhaps in your design you could have created an entrance that really attracted the attention of visitors. A fancy, more like inviting entrance would give your park more population.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
Although the park does look nice, the large front entrance may not be very appealing. Also, you could maybe include a variety of vegetation to diversify the park.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
The park could use more shade structures around the park and especially over the playground set. More benches should also be placed accordingly. The large front entrance archway could be reduced to bring some proportion to the park. Otherwise, the park seems to address the needs of the community.
LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition
final design will be relocated to garces