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LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

arch_crossen commented on Project: Valley Oasis

Thanks for sharing your thoughtful park design. I appreciated your attention to detail both in your descriptions and in your sketches/drawings. It is easy to get a strong sense of your design intentions and aspirations for this project. You describe a park that would serve as an oasis for the city and a place that changes with the seasons and the water levels. It is a great idea to incorporate things like weather patterns into landscape design, you are outside so you should use the beauty and complexity of nature to your advantage. For example - could you capture the impact of the wind through chimes or other features. Vegetation is not your only tool when you step outside to design. Great work - I hope you will continue to explore design and grow your skills as a sketch artist.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

AtechKaz commented on Final: Valley Oasis

This is a great representation of how the park will visually look, however it does not actually explain the big picture. Incorporating different views and detailed drawings will help visually explain what is going on within the park to prevent confusion. Your description of the park is very insightful, which explains the details of the park in great detail.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

clickap commented on Develop: Valley Oasis

information on the water fall and other details are added in a different post.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

Bettyboop commented on Develop: Valley Oasis

The variation of vegetation types is amazing and work perfectly to create the oasis feeling but for the waterfalls, where would the water source be and how much water would be used? Las Vegas is a desert, water should be conserved.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

Adams2015 commented on Collect: Valley Oasis

The idea for your park is very solid and realistic, but I don't believe this is the best location for your type of park. Your park will have many people such as dog walkers, families and joggers going though. Which is a good thing but not a good thing for the Law office the neighbors the property.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

Adams2015 commented on Develop: Valley Oasis

It is good that you consider the safety of the park for all. I don't believe your bias to cats is relevant but strays, dogs and cats, can be a concern.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

Adams2015 commented on Develop: Valley Oasis

It is good that you consider the safety of the park for all. I don't believe your bias to cats is relevant but strays, dogs and cats, can be a concern.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

Adams2015 commented on Develop: Valley Oasis

It is good that you consider the safety of the park for all. I don't believe your bias to cats is relevant but strays, dogs and cats, can be a concern.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

Adams2015 commented on Brainstorm: Valley Oasis

This is a very creative and reasonable idea. Take care not to make the walls too tall.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

King Fox commented on Final: Valley Oasis

Like the design of the park and how you incorporated the idea of a dog park with it. It seems environmentally friendly and is amazingly drawn. Good work.

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