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LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

jbanwart commented on Develop: Simple

I applaud you for sketching out your layout first. It really helps to put into perspective the scale of your project!

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

jbanwart commented on Brainstorm: Simple

I'm so interested in your attention to color in this park. Definitely an interesting way to brainstorm how color will influence the final design.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

jbanwart commented on Collect: Simple

Great research into pre-existing parks and how they work!

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

Phoked commented on Final: Simple

I think you've achieved an aesthetically pleasing park that maintained simplicity beautifully. Although one concern is exactly how one enters the park from both entrances in relation to the site you used. From the renderings you've provided in develop solutions it is hard to understand this, a site plan of the overall park can help describe this.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

saandy commented on Final: Simple

The park is simple but it definitely looks great. With the busy surrounding, a nice place with trees and vegetation is definitely attractive.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

mimuse commented on Develop: Simple

I like the park design, it has an interesting pathway, you might have wanted to add a bit more privacy with the benches, or the meeting areas so that people feel more comfortable meeting up there with out having others taking up more space.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

Adams2015 commented on Collect: Simple

I agree that in the location you choose that a simple but visually appealing design would be best.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

Modus commented on Final: Simple

The simplification of design is definitely magnetic, good job! I too, alongside I'm-a-CD, question the land use around the rotunda-like structure. What can you incorporate that can possibly give back to the environment? Otherwise nice park!

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

Base Offest commented on Final: Simple

Very simple and nice. Fits well for the general area and Las Vegas.

LPocket Park Design | 2015 National High School Architecture Competition

I'm-a-CD commented on Final: Simple

I like the overall design of the park. The only thing I would think about is what use can come from the brown area surrounding the park? Will you put grass there, or would there be plants there? It seems to be a waste just leaving the surrounding area dirt. Aside from that, the actual park is very good. Anyone who goes there is sure to be at peace.

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