ILEFandCo. have determined that the school is not taking full advantage of the space that they have. There are a lot of areas that are not being used well; this is something that we will be working to solve. Another problem that has been acknowledged and taken into account is that it gets really hot in classrooms during the summer time which means there will have a change with the way the windows are set out.
The bookshelves are not being utilized to their fullest potential; they are hardly used by students, as they don’t have enough books that have any correlation to subjects that are studied at school. There are many “little” problems that we will need to tackle before doing anything that is dramatic towards out project.
Having lockers outside is ineffectual because there is no reason for them to be placed outside of the building. They should then be inside thus solving the problem that books get wet from rain and also the problem that there is nothing in the hallway being displayed.
MY SUCESS STATEMENT WILL BE:
Our design will have an excellent use of space as the school does not utilise the space well enough. It will also comprise of a place that has a coffee and vending machine. This is essentially a café for students to study or relax during break time.
Comments
Hello IELF and Co. I am very impressed by the English you have used in this overview- there is some very nice use of passive tenses and third person, formal writing. Keep it up!
I can see you are thinking a lot about how you can improve the area already, and you have some great ideas. Remember to keep an open mind until you have completed your research- who knows what information you will get from the other students and teachers, and the other sources you will be looking at. The first part of your success statement is good because it is more general. Do not make assumptions as to your final product though- how about `the space will provide a comfortable and relaxing environment so the students can feel at home in their learning environment', for example... this means you can look at different ways of achieving this rather than restricting yourself to a coffee machine etc. How about a Starbucks???