Good start on the Revit model.
I am still a little hesitant about the bridge and the symmetrical, double walkway across the sculpture garden - I think something asymmetrical would compliment the rest of your form even more.
Overall your process was fantastic and I am sure you will continue to grow into a great architectural designer. The way you write about your ideas is great, and at this stage that is an even more important indicator of your future than drawing or rendering skills. One comment about the writing -in the final summary eventually when you have more drawings to show, don't feel like you need to convince us of how beautiful each feature is. You don't want your writing or your verbal presentation if you talk about the project to sound like a sales pitch.
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I like your models, they are well designed and show what it will look like if it was built.
@Rzebu: Thank you! It was a very long process that required many complex forms, but I learned a lot in the end!
Good start on the Revit model.
I am still a little hesitant about the bridge and the symmetrical, double walkway across the sculpture garden - I think something asymmetrical would compliment the rest of your form even more.
Overall your process was fantastic and I am sure you will continue to grow into a great architectural designer. The way you write about your ideas is great, and at this stage that is an even more important indicator of your future than drawing or rendering skills. One comment about the writing -in the final summary eventually when you have more drawings to show, don't feel like you need to convince us of how beautiful each feature is. You don't want your writing or your verbal presentation if you talk about the project to sound like a sales pitch.
Would be nice to see the final floor plans in this stage.