Hi- I'm one of the jury members, an architect in Indianapolis (from Chicago). Lots of great work here- you've done well with Revit! You did a good amount of research, including looking into some proposed design solutions/materials. You noted many of the problems with the current gym. One thing I would have liked to see would be a bit more on how you solved some of the storage/equipment issues you noted- most of the design proposal was about the new facilities and new space. It would have been interesting to see more what you did to solve previous problems.

Also, a good job modeling the whole new space, in a realistic way, and talking about how it would work over the existing parking garage. A way to improve the presentation of the final solution would be to find a way to visually indicate, on your renderings/plans, what is existing, what is renovated (in the existing space) and what is new.

Overall great job!