04/22/12
An image of the second cafeteria I started in its first design stages

Comments

While I see you have developed two initial designs in this phase, and highlighted different ideas for details or specific elements with the zoomed in views, don't forget that the brainstorming phase is a great time to use mediums that allow you to explore many ideas quickly. If you are able to develop 3d computer models quickly great, but don't be afraid to sketch by hand too.

Juror Comment -
It's hard to get a sense of how these possible additions will work with the existing building and flow of the cafeteria since you did not include an existing floor plan. That's always crucial for additions - your space might be fabulous but if it renders the existing function of the kitchen impossible then it won't be a success.