Very well done. You have lots of opportunities still to define color and materials but you have walked us through a lot of design development. I would have loved to see more sketches and models (no physical models is always a problem in my mind since you are creating space). The computer is good but working in real materials at a defined scale, especially in the beginning, is better. My last comment would be this: add all of the design ideas into a final fly through- take us from beginning to end much like a student moving through and using the space. And also one last question- what happens when the weather is cold or rainy?