2012 national competition project #189 | cafeteria redesign
Here is a shot outside of more people. The garage doors are supposed to have glass in them, if you are wondering what the grey is. The blue solar shingles are not supposed to go through to the underside of the shed roof, but the software would not let me display them otherwise.
Comments
Good job. I love having the figures for context. I'd suggest avoiding apologies for the software- often times we are not even aware of these types of mistakes. Once you mention it, however, we are drawn to it more readily.
The angle you chose for this view is dynamic with its asymmetrical composition and since it includes both a table in the foreground (to the right) and others far into the background (to the left). The people are a great addition to the renderings. Next you can work on tweaking the materials and light sources to get an even higher quality rendering.