09/12/12
We as a group believe that if we have an entrance that reflects our pavilion in a positive, welcoming way, and this ticket booth entrance to such a stadium reflects on how welcoming it is. We might make a ticket booth like this, or we can just do a classic state fair style one in the entrance.

Comments

You have noted that this inspiration image "may or may not work." What is your criteria for determining if it works or not? Is it a functional, form or aesthetic issue? What is it that may work? An important thing to be able to do is be critical of your own work and the work of others. This doesn't mean negative, you can also be positive. Try not to simply say "I like this" or "I don't like that" - instead try to identify what you like or don't like.

Keep up the good work and post more images of your scheme.

Bram Martinez, EIS--Thank you for the advice, we will keep your advice in consideration., and revise this slide so it will make more sense.

Better description - well done. It is much more believable and your confidence in your scheme is apparent.

Tracee Brooks, EIS--Thank you! We will continue to work harder on getting our point across more clearly.