Thouwayek's Account

I like this model because I can really see how your concept of DNA is used throughout the space. I would be curious to see; however, how you can incorporate that element throughout the floor plan, flow of the space, and other design elements.

It looks like you have incorporated many things from your wish list. I would encourage you to think about circulation and avoiding dead end corridors. This will help use space the most efficient way possible.

This is great work! I like how you weave your concept in with the structure and also consider the industrial area currently around it and draw inspiration from it. I also like that you thought about how the focal structure could be used both aesthetically and functionally (ie ventilation).

This is an interesting take on the entrance. What do you want the experience to be for the spectator or athlete when they enter the space and how does your design achieve that? Also, could you explain why you chose this form? I would be interested to hear more of your ideas!

I like that you included this and the diagram is very thorough; however, I would like to see you analyze this diagram as to what it means for your design and the solution to the design problems your school faces.

This is an informative overview and I like that you introduced your concept of DNA. I am interested in hearing more about your reasons for placing the gym underground. Some things to think about with this is the use of daylighting. Also, many schools showcase their athletic facilities to inspire school spirit. How could you incorporate that with your school's culture and your proposed design?

I really like how evocative your facade is! Focus on determining striking and sustainable materials to put your design in action.

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Here is an enlarged version of this Sound/Property Analysis:
Enlarged Sound/Property Analysis

As a student athlete myself, I understand the importance of focusing at the task (game) at hand without outside distractions, especially with the clutter of commercialism on my site. I would love to exchange ideas with you on how to make our pavilions as user friendly as possible! Thanks for the comment!