TrevonRogers1's Account

Grade 18

You need to describe the added detail here. Grade 17

I'm very impressed with the inspiration images you found for collect info. I would have liked to see your develop solutions look more like a trial and error to get to your final design, instead of adding one element at a time. Take develop solutions seriously and it will really effect your final design! Great job and keep up the good work!

Great development of your ideas. Try to bring the character of your hand sketches into your final computer renderings.

I think the park looks nice, but having benches out in the grass may be unattractive to some people who don't want to walk across grass. Maybe there should be concrete paths to the benches and have the benches sitting on concrete themselves.

Did you consider adding some sort of effect that includes water. I think that it would be a good idea, because you live in Chicago. You could also have added the type of trees that change colors as the seasons change. I think that it would add to the aesthetic of the city that you live in.

Good sketches and explanation for your sketches. But, the sketches should have been taken from a different angle. Grade 17

Grade 18

You need to describe the need for this park, and why you chose your location. What do you hope to accomplish with your design? Grade 16

Where are your sketches?