This was my first thoughts for what I wanted the outside of my building to look like, as well as how it would relate to other aspects of the site. I did like the design at first, but then i came to realize that the overall squareness of the design didn't suit my tastes.
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I like the repetition of the arch. If you can repeat that throughout the rest of the design, you will soften up the squareness of the rest of your building. I also appreciate that you did a hand sketch of the space.