Lincoln East Cafeteria
This is the Serving Area of out Cafeteria and it allows for movement of students to get any food they want. This however can sometimes lead to problems because flow through this area can get clogged because of too many student and not enough space.
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Here's a great example where 'mashing up' the orthographic floor plans with some photographs can help explain what you believe are issues while allowing you as a designer to begin thinking about why the clogging is happening- all through effective use of photos and drawings that serve as diagrams. Maybe the issue is the amount of allotted space for the flow- this is best shown in a floor plan with dimensions or superimposition of a typical student or students. Use the images to your full advantage to understand the issue and where possible solutions lie as you move forward.
You have taken good photos that illustrate the spaces well, except it would also have been helpful to have taken photos while the cafeteria is in use and filled with students so that potential problems or challenges are documented better.