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A good idea could be to develop these ideas within a framework of classicism.
These continue to be very nice sketches and are easily understood. Excellent work!

A good idea could be to develop these ideas within a framework of classicism.
These continue to be very nice sketches and are easily understood. Excellent work!

Beautiful sketches again. My suggestion here, however, is to switch up your presentation mode and perhaps simplify things so that you can really explore specific areas. Think of this as a long journey; your first images were views out of a fast moving train and now you are walking through the town and so things have slowed way down and you can look at specific issues more closely and in greater detail. This is the beauty of design- it is a story and so pacing is very important as well. We initially see things in broad strokes but eventually we want to examine things close up and really focus.