05/23/12
Section view of the balcony

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This image is very small to really take in the concept. I'd suggest using stacked images or telling the story through multiple images. Again, I'd love to see more sketches and some physical models to be certain of your process. Space, like physical products, need to be mocked up to truly understand the issues. Having a few students glued to fomecore cut-outs to help us understand the flow of people through the space would be a welcome addition.