05/20/12
Floor Plan for the 7th floor cafeteria.

Comments

Again, this drawing is well done but it is hard to take in the details at the current scale. My main concern continues to be an absence of design process- multiple ideas prior to the final concept. Because I looked over everything first before making comments, I know that this is your final idea. Also, I cannot reiterate just how important more sketches and models are to this early stage of the process.