05/23/12
Quiet Area

Comments

This sketch is great. It's detailed yet easy to take in and it's very descriptive of a particular issue. I'd still suggest some call-outs to help the jury and others understand the issues you are trying to resolve.

I am very intrigued by the unique quiet area that you have designed, but I am not clear as to what inspired the idea or how it exactly functions. For example, since earlier you did not state the challenges or problems your design is solving, I might be missing if this room is addressing a specific concern that you had observed. The seating facing the wall seems anti-social where as the round table in the middle the opposite. How do you envision the room being used?