You should get a picture from the other angle so your mentors can see the mural wall. Look at ways to chunk out the large paragraph so it's easier on the eyes. Double space in between paragraph divisions.
Looks good otherwise!
By bgrueneberger, Educator at 12:00 pm, 05 September 2012
You need to desiginate which building you are working on. Why isn't it circled?
By Stiles-Roberts, Educator at 12:23 pm, 07 September 2012
do you have a plan drawing of the existing space? that would be helpful to understand what conditions you have to work with.
By sarahebrady, Architect at 10:28 am, 12 September 2012
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You should get a picture from the other angle so your mentors can see the mural wall. Look at ways to chunk out the large paragraph so it's easier on the eyes. Double space in between paragraph divisions.
Looks good otherwise!
You need to desiginate which building you are working on. Why isn't it circled?
do you have a plan drawing of the existing space? that would be helpful to understand what conditions you have to work with.