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Great input of the site surroundings, in it current existence. A well designed park.

This park seems like it sets a very relaxed and secure mood for anyone who walks into it.

Having shady areas in park are pretty essential in Vegas due to the heat, so your thought out plan for this is really great! Your archs are really nice too and it gets out of that squary-look, nice job! :)

Overall, I really enjoy this design. The general layout of the park provides ample space for people to walk, with plenty of greenery for outdoor activities. I also enjoy the different sections in the park you made, as well as the feeling of privacy that your walls add. However, I think it would be best to connect the two halves of your park with a short pathway. While you can simply walk over the grass, the open space leaves a sense of division and interrupts the flow of the park. The decision of where this path would go ultimately falls to you, but that little space slightly above the right side of the canopy seems ideal. But other than that, this is a great park! Fantastic job.

I like the final design of the project. It's simple and cute!

I love that this shaded area would provide a good working environment for the people in the community.

I love your idea of hills and separate sub regions. That along with the walls of your site make it so that everyone is able to enjoy the park with their own space.
With that being said, don't you think it would be appropriate to have pathways that link different areas of your site (i.e. getting from the canopy area towards the benches in the southwest corner of the site)? If you were to come from your main square and head towards the southwest benches or the southeast open space, you would have to walk through grass. Although this would not be a problem to most, do you think those that have physical impairments would have adequate accessibility to these regions of the park?
That's just a concern that I have. Other than that, good work! I love the way you thought of creating different regions of the park, while still keeping them conjoint!

You should check your trees and see if you are using the right ones for the project. Also, i would try to make the two paths that you have in your park connect. This would help with the overall flow without making scars in the earth.

I enjoy all of the bright colors on top of the roofs. I enjoy all of the walls and bricks you put into this design. I also like the hill where people could lie down and look at all the different things that is popping in life. Then only thing that i am worried about is the trees. Do you believe that they provide enough shade for a desert park.

I really like the idea you presented with your park. I can see how the park's concept allows it to effectively bring a more personal space.