Acarbajal's Account

I would have loved to see interviews with the community to see how potential park constituents felt about your average bear (or otherwise). Does the community like bears? Or are they afraid of them? Are bears even welcome in that park?

I like how you considered making a space for children to use. It shows that you really thought in depth of what your purpose of your park should be. That being said, do you think that a jungle gym is the best item to place in that area? Given the location of the site, the jungle gym itself would not be utilized as much.
Less than 20% of the residents within the 89101 area are below 12 years old.
I do think that you thinking about an area where children can enjoy themselves and receive physical activity is great, but don't you think a space that could be used for multipurpose would be better?
Other than that, I think you're heading down the right path. Good stuff!!

The 4 slits idea is really really cool! I love how you're keeping in with the Yogi theme. However, do you think that using glass is the best way to go? As much as I love the idea of using glass, I do not think it would be the best choice to use in a public environment. I hate to say it, but nowadays, plenty of parks are vulnerable to vandalism. The destruction of property would be most susceptible in this case.
Other than that, I love your interpretation of your theme and how you choose to employ it.
Keep up the good work!

I really like the shaded area that's surrounded by glass in the background but won't the glass absorb the heat and just make it hotter inside the area. I don't know man just an opinion. But it looks really good though overall.

I really like the design and the way this turned out but did you think about low maintance? This design seems like something that will require a lot of care and work. I would suggest instead of using pure glass, you should take metal and punch holes through it to make to let the sunlight come through.

I like the type of atmosphere that you are trying to create here, it is pretty clear that your target is to bring families together into a park with and iconic name such as Jellystone.

I like your ideas of the park!! It's simple yet it includes the elements needed in a pocket park!

Brilliant idea! I think this will work because it is a nice design.