Aubhumphrey10's Account

Nice job with your project. You did a particularly good job of demonstrating the steps of the design process. I like your focus on the outdoor area and feel that this design, if implemented, could be a great contribution to your school. Well done.

It is nice that you included this sketch - it gives me a clear picture of the overall layout and space.

It would be nice if you could include a little bit more text on the drawing or explanation below so the viewer understands why you chose this particular solution.

I would like to see a little bit of explanation about why you chose this particular layout.

Great job! This is an inspiring, yet practical solution to creating an inviting and healthy cafeteria.

Thinking about what components of the space need to be adjacent is a really critical part of design. I am so glad you are thinking about this and included this aspect of your design process!

This is great! I haven't seen this in any of the other projects! It would be great to know how you incorporated things like privacy needs into your final design. Great job!

I really appreciate that you included these bubble diagrams and love that you sketched them on scratch paper taped to your notebook. Great demonstration of your design process. However, it would be helpful if you used the text box to explain these drawings a bit more. They are a little hard to read. As someone viewing the project, I would really like to know what you were thinking when you worked through these designs.

There clearly is lots of potential for improvement. Including this photo really helped me understand the current cafeteria and outdoor seating arrangement.

Including the existing floor plan was helpful to understand the current conditions of your school's cafeteria.